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Where I saw you

We were all there: Alice of Wonder, you, me, even a Cat…

…us, behind a glass Wall, suddenly we were the audience, one body reaching to the Thing :

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we peered through darkness from parched fires in our eye, smoking ash of our soul. The Thing breathed Life..

nothing dared It’s route. What are you ??? We screamed in the mute throat of our Silence. The Vision heard.

Love, It said, I am. It raked our ash with Nails as if from a Cross bleeding love.

I wake, with new words: “Now we peer through a Glass darkly, as in a dream….“

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35 responses to “Where I saw you”

  1. Nobbinmaug avatar
    Nobbinmaug

    This felt like a vivid dream sequence.

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    1. Innerdialects avatar
      Innerdialects

      Glad you think so, guess it was a dream too, a living one, if that doesnt confuse things a bit more!😅

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  2. subroto avatar
    subroto

    An intriguing and poetic take on the prompt. Nice one.

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    1. Innerdialects avatar
      Innerdialects

      Thankyou 🙂, and for being here, with kind comment! Warm wishes.

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  3. granonine avatar
    granonine

    Because I love the Bible, and was so familiar with your references–“Love. . . I AM”–I thoroughly enjoyed this wonderful piece of literature/art. I tend to be of a quite practical turn of mind, so digesting something like this takes me some time. Anyway, welcome to our sometimes zany, sometimes serious group. I look forward to reading more from you.

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    1. Innerdialects avatar
      Innerdialects

      Thankyou so much for being here and taking the time for honest feedback. My apologies for a delayed response, and too…oh for not taking care to explain. Will do so, ( add footnote maybe). Yes I tend to not be practical at all, most times. Sigh. Glad you were kind about it. ‘Zany/serious group’s but so inspiring. ‘M blest to know you all this way. Warm wishes, from a warm country (India)🌻.
      Rayla.

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  4. Imelda avatar
    Imelda

    Beautiful!

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    1. Innerdialects avatar
      Innerdialects

      Thankyou Imelda, glad you were here🌻🙂

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  5. ForgivingConnects avatar
    ForgivingConnects

    Wow. This is powerful, beautiful, raw. So lovely to meet you. Welcome to my blog, thank you for following it!!
    Blessings, Debbie

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    1. Innerdialects avatar
      Innerdialects

      Thankyou so much Debbie, that means a lot to me. And how lovely to have you here. Blessings backy🌻

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  6. larry trasciatti avatar
    larry trasciatti

    Really good, with such impressive imagery

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    1. Innerdialects avatar
      Innerdialects

      Thankyou Larry, Life and all its scenes, do leave a reflection of unseen reality in our lives.🌻

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  7. ceayr avatar
    ceayr

    Poetically powerful, with all sorts of memory prompts making me wonder…

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    1. Innerdialects avatar
      Innerdialects

      I’m so sorry, did think I replied here? Thankyou so much for being here and for connecting with my drift. Though I did wonder what you ‘wondered..?’

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      1. ceayr avatar
        ceayr

        Laughing.
        Good question.
        All sorts of thoughts were triggered by your words, but I couldn’t really grasp any of them to see where they were from or where they went.
        This is a reflection of my mental process, and no criticism of your piece.

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        1. Innerdialects avatar
          Innerdialects

          Ah’m. I should be apologising….🙂. Alright, if I may….’ the Vision’ looking at Players on stage, is symbolized by the Cross. So, Nails. So, Christs Love.. for humanity.
          Have I further complicated your wonder…😅

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        2. Innerdialects avatar
          Innerdialects

          The last line Quotes the famed Love Chapetr(1Corinthians 13): “…we peer as thru’ a glass darkly, but oneday, shall see, face to face…”

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  8. plaridel avatar
    plaridel

    this is deep, but i love every word. 🙂

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    1. Innerdialects avatar
      Innerdialects

      Glad you did🌻

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  9. Dale avatar
    Dale

    Welcome to Friday Fictioneers, RN! What a wonderful tale you have woven.

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    1. Innerdialects avatar
      Innerdialects

      Dale thankyou🌻! Glad to be a tiny part of it.

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  10. thelonelyauthorblog avatar
    thelonelyauthorblog

    Beautifully writtten. You set the mood wit rich descriptions.

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    1. Innerdialects avatar
      Innerdialects

      Thanks so much, means a lot that you were here. 🌻

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  11. Keith's Ramblings avatar
    Keith’s Ramblings

    Wow, that’s brilliant!

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    1. Innerdialects avatar
      Innerdialects

      Thankyou so much and for being here 🌻!

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  12. susanmehr avatar
    susanmehr

    Beautifully penned.

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    1. Innerdialects avatar
      Innerdialects

      Thank you Susanmehr, and for dropping by!🌻

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  13. rochellewisoff avatar
    rochellewisoff

    Dear RN,

    Vivid imagery and emotion. Nicely done. Welcome to Friday Fictioneers!

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Innerdialects avatar
      Innerdialects

      Thankyou Rochellewisoff, glad you liked it, delighted!

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  14. neilmacdon avatar
    neilmacdon

    The things we love can exact a terriible price

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    1. Innerdialects avatar
      Innerdialects

      Yes, especially for the Giver😇

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  15. Iain Kelly avatar
    Iain Kelly

    Wonderful descriptive writing.

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    1. Innerdialects avatar
      Innerdialects

      Thankyou 🌻

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  16. Tannille avatar
    Tannille

    Great atmosphere!

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    1. Innerdialects avatar
      Innerdialects

      Thankyou Tannille

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